Would it be a good idea to try to reduce each panel to bullet points to see how they can be re-worked to convey the message in different terms?
Would you give a clear sample ?
Reading between the lines are we going to be losing the dedicated TDE installer iso?
No, why do you think so ?
]]>The layout of the new/old front page looks good - clean, simple but informative.
The wording of the individual feature panels comes over as a bit 'clunky'. Part of this is down to the use of fully justified text which can work OK in wider panels but falls over in the narrower ones. The best example would be "system eliminating superfluous " taking up the same space as "thanks to unique Q4OS tools a user can". The result is that the eye does not follow a normal reading rhythm. This is a well known problem with justified text in small spaces.
Please also take a look at the line lower down "desktop look and feel ? Install"
In wider terms I get what you are saying in each of the panels but the way it comes over does not flow. It sort of reads as if it has gone through Google Translate a few times - if that makes sense.
Would it be a good idea to try to reduce each panel to bullet points to see how they can be re-worked to convey the message in different terms?
It would certainly be worth introducing the installed system options of base through to 'Full Fat' and the ease of adding apps through the Software Installer. I would also consider a bit more love for the Trinity install with XPQ4 for those folks who want the Windows look options it provides ( yes I know it's a separate project but...)
Reading between the lines are we going to be losing the dedicated TDE installer iso?
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]]>One quick suggestion -- move the download link and the donation segment to the right of the topbar, making it always visible, available and not easy to miss...
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On top of that, the Long Term Support release codenamed ‘Centaurus’ gives you five years of security patches and updates; it will be supported until July 2024 at least.
Better to remove the five years since it is only 3.75 yrs - give or take - till July '24
Anyone starting from now has no interest that it has been supported since July 2019.
Thus:-
On top of that, the Long Term Support release codenamed ‘Centaurus’ gives you security patches and updates until at least July 2024.
Download Q4OS
If you like Q4OS, please donate us.
please donate *to* us.
We believe in developing for past, preset and future.
past, *present* and future
On top of that, the Long Term Support release codenamed ‘Centaurus’ gives you five years of security patches and updates, it will be supported until July 2024 at least.
That last comma should be replaced with a semicolon, like this:
On top of that, the Long Term Support release codenamed ‘Centaurus’ gives you five years of security patches and updates; it will be supported until July 2024 at least.
Just one note. I am not sure if
"Download Q4OS" with "Donate" button right next to "The right desktop for your business" looks "professional"...
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